tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5374580723184247824.post5514135790224048256..comments2023-03-25T20:51:08.624-05:00Comments on Keena Kincaid : A bit of bragging...everyone join in.Keena Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15985958126062809043noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5374580723184247824.post-47469156234274785922010-09-06T18:10:02.472-05:002010-09-06T18:10:02.472-05:00Thanks, Keena. I should have said that I loved you...Thanks, Keena. I should have said that I loved your excerpt. That's the kind of deep character insight you do so beautifully. Your books always stop me in my tracks when I read one of these passages. And even though I can't wait to find out what happens next, I just have to stop, go back, reread, and take a moment to appreciate your skill. It's one I'd love to develop, but don'Bernadettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02203668301347954203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5374580723184247824.post-22226559553377234192010-09-06T12:15:12.793-05:002010-09-06T12:15:12.793-05:00Thanks for posting, Bernie. I liked this scene whe...Thanks for posting, Bernie. I liked this scene when I first read it, but I love it now. I love the line, "The delicious rumble of his voice vibrated against her skin."Keena Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15985958126062809043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5374580723184247824.post-15504760778990445542010-09-04T12:16:14.676-05:002010-09-04T12:16:14.676-05:00OK, I'll be brave. This started out as a drink...OK, I'll be brave. This started out as a drinking tea scene. It moved the story forward as the characters learned more about each other, but there was zero romantic tension. Here's part of the rewrite:<br /><br />“If Papa learns you were here, he will confine me to the house.” Priscilla offered Alston the towel.<br /><br />“You think your father would disapprove?” He weighed the towel in Bernadettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02203668301347954203noreply@blogger.com