14 July 2010

The path from idea to book is a messy one

In a recent discussion about getting past writer's block, I shared my trick for busting through those word tangles. In short, I write the scene that's in my head, even when it has nothing to do with my WIP.

I discovered this trick a few years ago while I was trying to write a murder mystery. The scene just popped into my head and refused to budget. For days I tried to write around it. I was determined to "stick" to the story I was working on. Eventually, though I gave it, wrote the scene, and then immediately found my way through writer's block.

What came next was a shock. The scene I'd written had nothing to do with my WIP. Nor did it have anything to do with the next few projects. Eventually, I forgot about it until a few weeks ago when I found it buried in my files--and realized it was a prologue to my upcoming book, ENTHRALLED.

It isn't in the book, neither is the POV character, but it was the germ of a story that eventually became ENTHRALLED. The scene (mostly unedited): 

The child was all his brother said she would be, and more. Robert of Ravenglas blinked, rubbed a hand over his eyes and looked closer at the child who stood before him. She didn’t move. If she breathed, he saw no sign of it in her immobility, and that caused him to hesitate. Such stillness seemed quite unnatural in a child of her years.
Dismissing his thoughts as whimsy born of grief and fatigue, he studied her critically. She was five, maybe six, at the stage of childhood where she was nothing more than sharp angles and large, wary eyes that brought to mind a stormy sky boiling over the North Sea.
He glanced at his brother. “Amilia’s eyes were not quite so…” he searched for the right word. “Unusual.”
“They were blue. Hers are blue.” The abbot toyed absently with a reliquary on the great oak table before him. “She is blonde, as your daughter was, and likely twice as clever.” He leaned over the table, his eyes bright and fixed on Robert. “This marriage is too important to this family to let it lie fallow.”
“Amilia was three at the betrothal. I hardly let it lie fallow.”
The knot of anger in his gut twisted and expanded until Robert thought he would explode from the burgeoning emotion. He knew the dangers of loving a child too much. It is not like Amilia was the first child he had buried. Pray God, she would be the last. He studied the scrawny, morose child that stood like a statue in the middle of the room. Blackness washed over his eyes, blotting out all sight, and he surged to his feet, wanting to be as far from this place of mischief and plotting as he could ride.
“Robert. Robert.”
He blinked at the soft call and realized he stood before the open door. The cold winter wind cooled his rage as he ranged about the room. He turned to face his brother.
“Do not relinquish this opportunity to rise in this world,” Edward said. “Think how it will benefit William. He will make a most advantageous marriage with Braose championing his cause.”
Unable to counter his brother’s rationale words, Robert turned back to the girl. She was as fair-haired as his Amilia had been, yet where his daughter’s hair had run as straight as the old Roman road, this girl was crowned with rumpled curls that fought against the ribbon holding it back. If she listened to his brother, or even heard him, she gave no sign of it. Instead, her eyes focused on him, as if she measured his willingness to deceive.
The harsh scrape of wood on stone signaled his brother now stood. Now doubt he would soon begin circling him like a wolf did its prey. He was the elder, the heir, but Edward had always been the ambitious one. “I have never met a child with as sharp a memory as this girl, even as young as she is.” Edward neared and began to walk a small circle. “’Tis as if she remembers everything she sees or hears. Perfect recollection. She discerns meaning from what she hears, as well.”
“Women should not think so much, at least not those given to wife.” Robert turned to the girl, and frowned as he studied her. There was a puzzle here, but it eluded him. “Why, brother, do you offer me this child?”
“She has no choice.” Edward closed the second circle around them. “She is a resident of the abbey, with her ailing father and an elder brother. Her father will be dead within a few days. She cannot remain once that happens.”
The coldness in his brother’s voice caused Robert shift uncomfortably. Almost against his will, he looked down at the child. Was it his imagination or had the child somehow moved closer to him? The sadness in her eyes could not be mistaken for any other emotion. With a sigh, he knelt and took hold of her thin wrists.
“How many years do you have, child?”
“Latin. She does not understand Saxon,” Edward said.
Robert nodded and asked the question again.
“Amilia was five.”
“How is that important?" Edward asked. "These peasants hardly know when they were born.”
“But she is not a peasant.” He straightened and looked at his brother. “Who is she?”
“‘Tis unimportant,” Edward said. “Her father’s wealth and land is ours.”
“And her brother?”
“He is ours, as well. If you do not want her…”
Robert turned back to the girl. He’d have to dress her in blue to bring out what little of the color lurked in her eyes. He rocked back on his heels. So, he’d made his decision. “Has the abbot explained why I am here?”
The girl nodded.
“You will be Amilia. And you will have a brother, my son William.”
“I do not like brothers.”
Robert held back a smile. “You will like William.” Tears flooded her eyes, and Robert deliberately softened his voice. “It is much to ask of you, I know. I
“There is no need to coddle the girl,” Edward snapped.
“If I am to make her daughter, I will start in this moment.” 

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